This is a good start but I really wanted to read more of what might happen when they are looking at the picture. Seems a bit of a cop out the way you have written it! 'Your'/'you're' - note the difference.
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This is a good start but I really wanted to read more of what might happen when they are looking at the picture. Seems a bit of a cop out the way you have written it! 'Your'/'you're' - note the difference.
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